Originally sold to Forgotten Ground Regained and Alliteration; featured in my forthcoming "Concrete in Watercolor" collection.
From the symbolic heft of the title to the turn at the end, a wonderful poem!
oh thanks Barbara. It was incredible to watch, I saw it on the Amtrak back from Ticonderoga in one of the lakes we passed. It was like he’d stored up a water gun worth in his belly and slug it all at once. Marvelous.
Nice poem. Lovely.
Thanks Benjamin. Really grateful for you and the feedback. Hope you're doing swell.
From the symbolic heft of the title to the turn at the end, a wonderful poem!
oh thanks Barbara. It was incredible to watch, I saw it on the Amtrak back from Ticonderoga in one of the lakes we passed. It was like he’d stored up a water gun worth in his belly and slug it all at once. Marvelous.
Nice poem. Lovely.
Thanks Benjamin. Really grateful for you and the feedback. Hope you're doing swell.